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After The Fact by ~chiefeagle02:iconchiefeagle02:

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A great chapter ended with lessons to gain.
But your words, my friend, don't lesson the pain.

"She might have been cheating." "She was too young."
"It was destined to fail." "She was never the one."

"I knew this was coming." "I told you so."
"I tried to warn you," as I try to let go.

You tell me these things after the fact
After the news.  After the flack.

It doesn't help matters that I loved her to death.
But your words turn the last six months to regret.

Your friendship I treasure, but your words I dismiss.
I'll be alright...if ignorance is bliss.

A great chapter ended while another begins.
But please let be.  My heart has to mend.
©2008-2009 ~chiefeagle02
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Sometimes the only thing harder than getting over a break up is hearing "I knew this would happen" from your friends.
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~BadMediCynInc22:iconBadMediCynInc22: Aug 21, 2008, 7:27:09 PM
so true, friends seem to say things at the wrong time. . .faved! :]

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~meredithbrooksrulez:iconmeredithbrooksrulez: Aug 24, 2008, 2:52:30 PM
Very true, I didn't know you wrote poetry, I enjoyed this read, and I am sorry if this is an autobiographical write.

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I'm a bitch, I'm a lover,I'm a child, I'm a mother,I'm a sinner, I'm a saint,I do not feel ashamed,I'm your hell, I'm your dream i'm nothing in between, you know you wouldn't want it any other way-meredith brooks
~chiefeagle02:iconchiefeagle02: Aug 25, 2008, 5:44:17 PM
Hey man. Haven't heard from you in a while. How are things going?

Thanks for the comments and for the :+fav:. This is the first poem I've written in a few years and the compliments I'm receiving let me know that I still have a bit of talent left in my pen. Back when I first started here in deviantArt, I wrote a lot of poetry (it's still up, but in the way back of my gallery). Lots of love and lots of angst.

Again, thanks for the comment and the :+fav:

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~meredithbrooksrulez:iconmeredithbrooksrulez: Aug 25, 2008, 9:29:35 PM
That's how I started here, love and angst ridden poetry, and the pattern hasn't changed much, not to talk about myself. I mean besides the fact that you asked, things are ok, I still have my body issues, and I feel like I should be attending a college with a dorm, but I am too much of a loser to do so I am going to a tech school in my hometown, starting tomorrow, yay. How are you doing? Ya I am sorry it has been awhile.

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I'm a bitch, I'm a lover,I'm a child, I'm a mother,I'm a sinner, I'm a saint,I do not feel ashamed,I'm your hell, I'm your dream i'm nothing in between, you know you wouldn't want it any other way-meredith brooks
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